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We significantly improve essays both for clients who write poorly and for clients who write well. As a single mother who has confronted homelessness and poverty, I am committed to reforming public education. I have a particular interest in improving the accessibility of schooling to homeless individuals, single mothers, and disadvantaged women of color. As a result of my own experiences, I am familiar with the despair and frustration endemic to individuals struggling to survive. I am convinced that increasing individuals’ access to education can make the difference between despondency and hope. I am applying for my doctorate in educational leadership so that I can pursue my life-mission: to make education accessible to all. Although I had many responsibilities, the role that consumed most of my time and energy was interviewing clients and assessing their physical and emotional needs.
One of my greatest contributions was streamlining and updating the paperwork associated with CAM’s intake process. I also generated an updated resource list that included many service agencies in the Houston area. By personally contacting each agency to acquire contact information and to learn about its services, I facilitated greater communication between service organizations and ensured that my clients had access to necessary aid. When I took the initiative to send out surveys asking agencies to rate our group’s effectiveness, I received an overwhelming response.